TheManofSteal13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Into the Darkness.]

wow

This is one of the first, somewhat, naked picture I've seen you draw all day! Did Kevin Bacon really helped you on this?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

uhhh I don't know....

hm.. thanks for the review!

[Puppeteer: Page 10]

Amazing

You definitely caught the moment there. I noticed a line of letters on the bottom left. Did that came from the ghost girl the puppeteer is holding?
Couldn't read that since its goes in that dark spot, but other than that this page has boom to it.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

oh, the thing on the bottom left is a sound effect.... i usually do those where there are sounds needed...
im no sure were its suppose to come from... but its an "oooohhh..."

[Puppeteer: Page 7]

lol

DUN-DUN! Short-sleeve guy! lol I suppose the dramatic lines can be good to introduce characters. By the looks of the last two panels, I can tell something eerie is going to happen and you done well to depict that.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

nothing too eerie... >.>
thanks :3

[Puppeteer: page 6]

coming together.

I can actually see how its coming together. The convo is short, but clear. I can't really make out where she is right now, but is she by the back-door of the building? keep em coming.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

nah, she's in a special effects room, in her ... building

[They hurt Flubby.]

WOW!

I love the colors, but I really love the glowing effects in this piece. It looks amazing! I can see that the eyes over the hair thing, but thats good. Aw man, I truly love this piece.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

awesome~
I am SO glad that you loved it! :D
i love it when people love my art! :3

[A present for fifty-50]

scaretastic!

This pic definitely screams tim burton.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

WOOH!

[I have a bad habit.]

stating the obvious

Well, there really isn't much to get. You can evidently tell the black trail of smears and footprints being left behind by this "wormthing", and though as hard it may seem due to the size of the pic you can tell by the look on her face that it isn't pretty. So it really must be a bad thing that happened.
The clouded effect gives it a dream-state look but its really grainy. I don't know the purpose of those white streaks, but I'm sure that confused some people a bit. Are there any effects or layer effects that can help with the grain?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

well, the lines on the bottom where suppose to be black, but they blended in too much. So i tried making them pop... but i guess that didn't turn out so well....

The grainy stuff i meant to do... make it look old and stuff...
i thought it looked fine XD
guess not.

[Puppeteer: page 5]

Looking good.

I do like alot of the details in there, but also be careful not to overdo it. I like how the puppeteer bows with the puppet in the top corner in the dark. Its good to have where people can read the text, but it's also important to keep the placing within a agreeable size inside the word bubbles.
Sometimes its hard, but also helps to compromise what you can do with it. The paneling is looking pretty good.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks!
Before, (we it loooked bad) it got a really low score... so i am happy that what i did gave it a higher score ^.^

[Momma hates me...]

darkness, imprisoning me!

This sorta look like a movie poster ad, but I'm pretty sure that isn't what you're going for. The dark grainy look is hmm, somewhat comfusing. The font looks alright, but if you're going for a more of a dramatic look, I would suggest perhaps a few that may best suit the scene.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

ya... i just did this for fun in under 30 mins....
didn't really know what i was going for XD

[Puppeteer: page 4]

woah, good reading path!

I'm really amazed how nice you did your panels in this one and your dialogue placement is perfect. I didn't imaged you'd have this one up so fast either.
Pretty graphic and intense enough, I still hope to understand what the issue is in the next page. Its a bit hard to see the strings when I can't zoom in though. Nice overall.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thansk!
sorry, but i dont know why it wont zoom in.... probably because it's too small :c
i'll try to fix it next time ^.^