TheManofSteal13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Earl Grey Tea]

Thank you

For letting me rack up easy points from your flashes.

[The Worlds: Enter Laui]

I'll give you some credit.

I thought there was a storyline going on, but then I see all of this jumble of video clips. Please decide if this is has a plot or its a video with a collage of different scenes. I do like the art and the menu screen though, but there's alot of things that doesn't do it justice.
I understand you're not very good with this, half of us, or even most of us aren't either. What we really want to hear though is that you have done your best to make a video otherwise people will think you haven't put any effort. If this video was only meant for you and your brother and you don't want it to be commented on then please DON'T put it up. This is Newgrounds, a public arena for artists, voice actors, animators,and musicians to compete for the best names to be known for. I give you more stars because I KNOW you can do better, but most important of all, Sarena, you have to be ready for public exposure whenever you decide to put something up.

Good luck to you.

Sarena responds:

This is basically a trailer for a much larger story, so that is why it is a collage of video clips. I did not mean to show a whole story in this video, I just wanted to show bits and pieces to preview it. And honestly, I did do my absolute best on the first part (excluding the other random parts after it shows "The Worlds: Enter Laui Eventure").

And I actually don't mind if people comment with constructive criticism on how to improve my works. I just hate it when I get all of these comments that have noting to do with the video, or comments that basically just tell me that I suck and should never dream about doing animation because I will never succeed. I want people to help me become a better animator and artist, because I know that I am not all that good, but I want to improve to be much better at it.

At first I was considering not even submitting this to Newgrounds because I know how stupid half the commenters are on this site, but I decided to anyway just in case a kind person came across this video who could help me improve. But thank you for not criticizing my video as horribly as the others and actually giving me advice.

[Mistea's Christmas]

you don't really suck. lol

This must be a storyboard for your Christmas flash? I say you have a good lead and an excellent song choice. Just don't forget to time the song with your flash when you make it, if you need help filling in the other half of the project follow up on the lyrics and it'll give you some ideas for the next few scenes.

[Ryu: Then and Now]

LMAO!!

He definitely would be the one to look back on the past, but If Ryu is working in a office, then I wonder where Ken is after 20 years.

[She's in my Class]

No need to wait!

There's plenty of voice actors you can definitely find here:
http://voiceacting.proboards.com/inde x.cgi

set up and post an audition and they'll be lining up to cast any role in your flash.
Keep up the good work!

[Distant Hearts]

God bless the broken road.

Damn, well if you had prior experience and just got back into animating thats a big plus.
I could sorta tell by the way its drawn that they were doodles, but the color and the music made it so much more.
This actually inspires,as an artist myself, me to start doing animation in which I have been afraid to do. Thank you for sharing this video.

[Sonic X: Cosmic Chase]

thats not bad!

I love alot of scenes in there. It could use some sound effects though, even if it doesn't have dialogue. My favorite scene was when Knuckles punched the ship in half, haha. Pretty cool.

Question if you don't mind me asking about the scene since I don't keep up with Sonic X, when Sonic turn to this glowing blue color is it like this untapped mystic power that was held dormant? I wasn't sure if it was from game or show, thanks for sharing this flash.

BritishGolgo13 responds:

It's my take on Hyper Sonic from the game. Thanks for the comment.

[Mastermind 5]

haha!

Very quirky humor there for this episode of Mastermind. lol
Mastermind looks more like an average villain than a sinister crime boss in this one.

[Experimental Intro- Final]

Thats pretty RAD-Ass!

Its badass in a radical sense of retrospect into the 90s. I really like this intro, love the design and color on the clothes, and would totally play it again if it had a replay button.

[Girlchan in Paradise Ep3]

Ahhhhh..wow

I...totally, did not expect the story to go to that direction. This is hanging me to the most warped confusing suspense, I have to know what the hell is...I mean, what happens next.