That is...awesome..
This is very much something that I have been looking for in my comics, story-wise. Reminds me very much of my mini comic, Epidemic.
You very much succeeded in taking a slice of life, a concept in which I have always roll with in my mini comics. There's always something to learn from life, but there's always a better way to teach them. Comedy and action! And anything you put in the mix that people find enjoyable.
You totally nailed that! Rock on.