TheManofSteal13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Puppet Master]

just for that.

you get a 10, a 5 out of 5, your pic faved, an oscar award, *not a hug*, become the puppet master, and everything!

[solaria]

yay for elves!

Its the glimer of her suit that just screams red sonya.

[Alien Symbol]

Very well done!

This one certainly have a nice depiction of a arcane glyph. It gives the impression of something of a video game! lol
Excellent work.

[I have a bad habit.]

stating the obvious

Well, there really isn't much to get. You can evidently tell the black trail of smears and footprints being left behind by this "wormthing", and though as hard it may seem due to the size of the pic you can tell by the look on her face that it isn't pretty. So it really must be a bad thing that happened.
The clouded effect gives it a dream-state look but its really grainy. I don't know the purpose of those white streaks, but I'm sure that confused some people a bit. Are there any effects or layer effects that can help with the grain?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

well, the lines on the bottom where suppose to be black, but they blended in too much. So i tried making them pop... but i guess that didn't turn out so well....

The grainy stuff i meant to do... make it look old and stuff...
i thought it looked fine XD
guess not.

[Puppeteer: page 5]

Looking good.

I do like alot of the details in there, but also be careful not to overdo it. I like how the puppeteer bows with the puppet in the top corner in the dark. Its good to have where people can read the text, but it's also important to keep the placing within a agreeable size inside the word bubbles.
Sometimes its hard, but also helps to compromise what you can do with it. The paneling is looking pretty good.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks!
Before, (we it loooked bad) it got a really low score... so i am happy that what i did gave it a higher score ^.^