TheManofSteal13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Puppeteer: Page 10]

Amazing

You definitely caught the moment there. I noticed a line of letters on the bottom left. Did that came from the ghost girl the puppeteer is holding?
Couldn't read that since its goes in that dark spot, but other than that this page has boom to it.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

oh, the thing on the bottom left is a sound effect.... i usually do those where there are sounds needed...
im no sure were its suppose to come from... but its an "oooohhh..."

[Puppet Master]

just for that.

you get a 10, a 5 out of 5, your pic faved, an oscar award, *not a hug*, become the puppet master, and everything!

[solaria]

yay for elves!

Its the glimer of her suit that just screams red sonya.

[Alien Symbol]

Very well done!

This one certainly have a nice depiction of a arcane glyph. It gives the impression of something of a video game! lol
Excellent work.

[Puppeteer: Page 7]

lol

DUN-DUN! Short-sleeve guy! lol I suppose the dramatic lines can be good to introduce characters. By the looks of the last two panels, I can tell something eerie is going to happen and you done well to depict that.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

nothing too eerie... >.>
thanks :3

[Puppeteer: page 6]

coming together.

I can actually see how its coming together. The convo is short, but clear. I can't really make out where she is right now, but is she by the back-door of the building? keep em coming.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

nah, she's in a special effects room, in her ... building

[They hurt Flubby.]

WOW!

I love the colors, but I really love the glowing effects in this piece. It looks amazing! I can see that the eyes over the hair thing, but thats good. Aw man, I truly love this piece.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

awesome~
I am SO glad that you loved it! :D
i love it when people love my art! :3

[A present for fifty-50]

scaretastic!

This pic definitely screams tim burton.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

WOOH!

[I have a bad habit.]

stating the obvious

Well, there really isn't much to get. You can evidently tell the black trail of smears and footprints being left behind by this "wormthing", and though as hard it may seem due to the size of the pic you can tell by the look on her face that it isn't pretty. So it really must be a bad thing that happened.
The clouded effect gives it a dream-state look but its really grainy. I don't know the purpose of those white streaks, but I'm sure that confused some people a bit. Are there any effects or layer effects that can help with the grain?

Sorrygirl99 responds:

well, the lines on the bottom where suppose to be black, but they blended in too much. So i tried making them pop... but i guess that didn't turn out so well....

The grainy stuff i meant to do... make it look old and stuff...
i thought it looked fine XD
guess not.

[Puppeteer: page 5]

Looking good.

I do like alot of the details in there, but also be careful not to overdo it. I like how the puppeteer bows with the puppet in the top corner in the dark. Its good to have where people can read the text, but it's also important to keep the placing within a agreeable size inside the word bubbles.
Sometimes its hard, but also helps to compromise what you can do with it. The paneling is looking pretty good.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks!
Before, (we it loooked bad) it got a really low score... so i am happy that what i did gave it a higher score ^.^