TheManofSteal13's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Momma hates me...]

darkness, imprisoning me!

This sorta look like a movie poster ad, but I'm pretty sure that isn't what you're going for. The dark grainy look is hmm, somewhat comfusing. The font looks alright, but if you're going for a more of a dramatic look, I would suggest perhaps a few that may best suit the scene.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

ya... i just did this for fun in under 30 mins....
didn't really know what i was going for XD

[Tara Rose]

Excellent work there!

Though its a bit dark to see the detail, I still love it.

[Jenny 2]

Nice edges

I like the contrast in the color. The right hand is a bit too small, but the face and the head is the best part of the picture.

[Puppeteer: page 4]

woah, good reading path!

I'm really amazed how nice you did your panels in this one and your dialogue placement is perfect. I didn't imaged you'd have this one up so fast either.
Pretty graphic and intense enough, I still hope to understand what the issue is in the next page. Its a bit hard to see the strings when I can't zoom in though. Nice overall.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thansk!
sorry, but i dont know why it wont zoom in.... probably because it's too small :c
i'll try to fix it next time ^.^

[Forever Summer]

wow

I'm surprised I haven't commented this yet. This is totally an awesome design for a skateboard. If I had been proficient with skateboards I would also totally have a hot chick designed on it..preferably elven ones...>_>

[Happy Birthday]

I wish you a happy birthday

Seriously, I had no idea. This character seems to look a bit like you! Facially I mean.>_>

Happy Birthday SakuraSama

[Monster Within]

drool

The monster looks like a total pervert looming over her. haha
I do like the center focal point though, it aligns the attention between the monster and the girl.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks! i am glad you liked it! LD

[Puppeteer Page 3]

Ouch!

Sure does look graphic. I like the line slashes in there and the spray stains in the background makes the scene look dramatic. Though the bottom left area looks pretty open the bottom right panel to be on, but that's really up to you.

Definitely would like to see where this is going.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thanks! I tried to make it look graphic... i actually had something else in the background instead of the spray stains, so... ya. i am glad that i changed it~
i'm glad that someone likes where this is going and what is going to happen next! :D

[Puppeteer: Page 2]

very nice

The black and white seems to work in your favor very well. I do still trying to figure out if this is a splash panel, a partial splash, or something of a sort. Pretty good.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

thank you~ that means a lot~